#2

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Author: emphadiate

Med student, chai lover, avid reader. Daydreamer extraordinaire. Slightly imbalanced.

30 thoughts on “#2”

  1. OH MY GOD.
    Man, this is awesome. Truly very beautiful. Loved it.The second stanza is the best, of course. But all of it is topping the levels of exquisiteness.
    WOW.

  2. A handwritten note is always better in its grandeur than any typed writings. Always. It has this special feeling of intimacy and personality to it, also a lot of feel.

    Loved it. Brilliant as always H.

  3. Wow that second stanza has such oomph to it.
    The breaks in this piece just make it so much more arresting. This woke up sleepy me right now.

    Also, the presentation is LOVE ❤

  4. I am so sorry to do this to you 😛 … But I think Maryam said it all. Loved the unique presentation, seems like a very spontaneous burst of words.

  5. A sigh heavier than the earth itself…and all it takes a hint of melancholy
    True that… *heaves a sigh* and some if onlys…
    Beautiful in its simplicity!I’d written something similar when I was in the first year of college…but it was just me writing to myself.Thank you, for doing that..nostalgia at it’s best.
    Love love love this…
    Presentation!!!Refreshing and intimate.
    Kudos for that too…
    😀 :-*

  6. THIS IS WONDERFUL! MAYBE BECAUSE I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT MELANCHOLY. AND I’D NEVER UNDERSTAND HOW DO PEOPLE DO PEOTRY. *SHABASH*

  7. This is beautiful, Hadia. This is eloquent. Deep. I love winters. Idk but I grab a winter’s night everywhere. It speaks of melancholy to me. I imagined it reading alongside by favorite’s window’s pane. It created a certain vibe. The hand script is a very good idea.
    In terms of technical writing, I’d suggest you a tip. Though there are many forms of poetry writing. From narrative to lyrical to broken verses, a lot. But still one single step to bring more fine touch in your pieces.
    After jotting down any poem. Read your writings again. Every verse. See if it reads complete or not.
    Just as,
    All it takes,
    Is a
    Hint
    Of melancholy.
    Is a and hint should’ve been in a single verse to give complete sense as is a, itself is meaningless.
    I might be sounding very technical here in terms of writing as writing for international & national forums made me very curious about these tiny aspects. But just wanted to share it so your way with poetry will be smooth.
    Deeply touching & profound piece. LOVED IT.

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